It was beautiful, all I can write is action and you have a simply beautiful short story on memories and true love.
And lo, the beast looked upon the face of beauty... and beauty stayed his hand. And from that day foward, he was as one dead.
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Beautiful. Really, truely beautiful.
I like what you've written and I even loved what you didn't write in this story. It conjures up beautiful images and yet leaves enough for the imagination.
There's nothing I'm able to say. I'm lost for words, having read that. Beautiful. Just amazing!
TOO MUCH TEXT BRAIN IN THe RED.
omg
Holy crap, my pic is in your profile! Rawk! <3
Also, I heard that you are only 10 years old now, and thus believed it immediately. But rest assured my friend, no matter whether you are 10, 16, 26 or 70- you're still one of my favourite homies.
xo Neph
Still writing a hell-ova-lot are we old pal?
I <3 you
I really wish you were a mod. :(
Hello old friend =)
Goodbye young enemy =(
Oh my god. I cried like i havent in such a long time. That was the most beautiful story i've read. You are great man... just great. T-T
Mr-President
Wow. One of the most touching stories I have ever read. I assume you didn't want to explain how she died? I guess sometimes it's better not knowing. 10/10, and I'll be expecting more from you!!